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[The Fader Teaser]

Not bad!

I have many ideas for your movie. Actually I have a song that I made that would work perfectly for your movie. All though you should change the name to something like "Beyond the Shadows." That is a kick ass movie title. The Fader just doesn't cut it. Well if you want to find out more email me. [e-mail] <J>

[Tales of Nosu]

What!?

Damn man them are some mad skills. I couldn't believe how well this was made. I could only see one thing that would be wrong with it. His eye looks a little wierd when he's looking right at you. Last time I knew human eyes couldn't do that. Well enough said about that. Damn I couldn't believe just the beginning preloader dude. The shading and stuff was freaking awesome. Well I hope that you put out a second one. No wait! YOU HAD BETTER PUT OUT ANOTHER ONE! Well keep it up. <J>

[S P A E C]

Where's the sound?

Dude, this was freaking awesome but you didn't put any sounds into it. I so could have given it a full ten and a five but I just couldn't because you didn't have any sound to it. I know the file size is already huge but you could have added sound to it. I as a 56ker would want to wait a little longer to just have sound. Now your preloader sound was pretty cool and so was the preloader. The risidual philanthropist gargantuan martyrs before me should learn how to do a review. Well I hope that you redo it one more time so that I can watch and "HEAR" it again. <J>

[GSP Elementry High PV]

Got Tabs?

Dude I liked the movie and all but I liked the background music even more. So I was wondering if you could send me some tabs or something. I would have given the sound a 10 but I could barely hear the dude talking over the background music. I would like your Intros music as well as the Outro music. I thought that they both rocked. Well keep coming up with those cool tabs so that you can put them with your Flash animations. <J>

GSProds responds:

Hi demitja,

Thanks for reviewing. Since most people liked the music very much I decided to place the tabs in the full version wich must come out this month. At this point I have recorded 6 songs (including 2 covers wich i changed a little bit with new lirics, cover from tool and another band)

So basicly, a love song, some other funny songs and lotsa BGM.

GSPRods. (Luke)

[The Clone of Goku]

Your Response

If you want to make your file size smaller make a lot of the graphics symbols.(ex. hair, backgrounds, and characters) This should reduce your file size considerably. Try shrinking the sound by using the edit or double clicking on the sound icon in your library. Then you can compress it from there. If you don't have Flash MX then you should get it. You can get it free by using Kazaa shareware at www.Kazaa.com and then downloading it from someone else who is giving it away. I've used Flash MX and it really shrinks the size of the flash movie. I've made some movies that are about 10 Mb big and it shrunk them down to about 250 Kb. Well about your movie it was great but you should smoothen out the edges and make the shading correct. ex. neck on Clone Goku. Otherwise the graphics were cool. I hope that you put more on here. So that I can look at them. Also if you could send me what you have made because I would like to add them to my collection. I won't submit them under my name at all. I just like the work that you have on here. Well I guess that's all I have to say and I hope that you put more on here for me to see.
<J>

CrazyJehuty responds:

Wow Cool Thanks M8!!! I'm glad some one responded, THANX THANK YOU MERCI DIOLCH WHATEVER!!!!!! IM SO PLEASED!!! :) :) :)

Thank you for saying my movie was good anyway and thank you Julius Skater and thanx kind of to Mrpoo, because Mr poo gave me an idea......>:)!!! MWAHAHAA!!

THANK YOU AGAIN ALL!!!

NOW I WILL SEND IN A FINNISHED MOVIE OF GOKU GOING SSJ1 FOR THE 1ST TIME!!!!!!!

HEEEEEEHEEEEEEEEEHAWHAW!!!! THANX AGAIN!

Bye bye and see you soon

From-Aran Saunders

[School Daze ~Episode 2~]

Good job!

I can think of only one thing was wrong with it and that was the sound didn't match up with the animation. Otherwise it's a pretty good show. What happened to the guy from jail? Well just keep it up. <J>

red-hot-ant responds:

Thanks alot monkey! Hopefully you saw part one... right?!?
Heh heh... thanks for the vote of confidence!!

[Iron Fist example]

Decent need sound!

I'm glad that you are getting away from stick animation and I hope that you stay away from it unless you do something quite different with it. There are too many fighting stick movies in the Portal. I would have given you a ten if you had some kind of preloader, back ground music, and sounds that went with it. So all I can say is keep it up and stay away from stick.*NOTE: If you don't know how to do a preloader I can send you the information on how to do one or I can just send you the file. You chose which one but I would recommend doing it on your own so that you can be able to make some better preloaders in the future and be able to do them with ease. Well hope that you re-do this so that I can come back and watch it again. <J>

[Brutal Shootout3]

This was good.

Although it was a pointless battle, I still think that it was pretty good. I'm tired of people voting shitty because it's not like something else that was good. If you go a little further into detail like who's on which side and some kind of storyline it will probably do a lot better I guess? Don't know why it's so low. All I can say good luck in the future flash animations.

[Buu's Attack On Earth]

Good Beginning

Ok this is pretty good but you need to add a little bit more. For instance a background would be good and not having them say he's taken him to darkness or something like that. If you add a background which actually interacts with the characters it would make it a whole lot better. For instance when Vegeta blows himself up have a big whole left in his quake. If you added a little bit more interaction with the characters. For instance having them hit each other a few times. Now I'm a DBZ fan and I know Vegeta got captured by Buu's fat and all but he was saved by Trunks and Goten, not Goku. Plus when Goku goes SSJ3 I don't think that he would have been beaten by Buu. Now you should find some kind of music for the background. There is a lot out there to chose from and it would make it a whole lot better. I would have given you a 10 on the review but you just didn't put enough effort into it. You stole the sprites from one of Butoden games. Now one question. where did you get the sprite of Goku in SSJ3 form. I would like to have that picture if you don't mind. Well good luck on your next movie. <J>

[FFF: Duo]

This was Great!

Man it looked like it was a game from supernintendo or something at the beginning. Did you make all those characters? Good job on the graphics and sound! The storyline was totally engulfing. Although your movie is very huge in size, I think that it is worth the wait! Your credits should go the other way though. I was kind of hard to read! Well I hope that you keep on making more! Good luck with everything! <J>